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Post by piro on Apr 17, 2007 16:42:21 GMT -5
I was going to say it's better than anything I can make.
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Post by Bree on Apr 17, 2007 16:42:55 GMT -5
sure you were, you slime ball
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Post by piro on Apr 18, 2007 20:04:07 GMT -5
Words hurt.
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Post by Bree on Apr 19, 2007 16:09:06 GMT -5
Read Shira's Rant
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Post by piro on Apr 19, 2007 20:06:25 GMT -5
Criticism, right. Looks pretty good, I like how you made it like a menu.
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Post by Bree on Apr 23, 2007 15:57:57 GMT -5
?? ?
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Post by Lali on Apr 25, 2007 10:59:18 GMT -5
Anyway, to get back on track... I like it. The words before and after each verse tie together well and amuse my sense of symmetry. The rhythm and rhyme work well almost all the time, too. The structure wins my vote, though. ^_^ Nice work.
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Post by Bree on Apr 26, 2007 12:09:54 GMT -5
Thank you
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Post by piro on Apr 26, 2007 21:24:56 GMT -5
I must admit it does rate a high quality for the love of COFFEE!! (Sorry, I'm very close to breaking the habit)
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Post by Bree on Apr 29, 2007 15:31:34 GMT -5
I am not
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Post by piro on Apr 30, 2007 20:33:27 GMT -5
Yay! No more coffee addiction for me! I'm freeeee. Anyway, I'll be recovering so expect great things from me!
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Post by Bree on May 3, 2007 16:07:05 GMT -5
I shall never get over the only drug that I can take
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Post by piro on May 6, 2007 15:59:49 GMT -5
What's that? (I'm back into coffee again, )
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Post by Bree on May 7, 2007 17:01:40 GMT -5
COFFEE
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