Post by Shira on Aug 18, 2006 15:32:04 GMT -5
I started a Highschool Roleplay on www.shira-oka.com/forum, and it's been going okay so far. That was, until the seventh page, where this was found:
[in the bookstore!]
Rynn: hmm....*looking through the shelfs* its got to be in here....*looks for a few minutes and finds a book and heads to the counter to pay for it*
Staff: hmm...thatill be 25. 75 please.....
Rynn: *takes out her wallet and is fliping through her unorganised bills*....can you break a 50?
Staff: sure...hmm never seen anyone with white hair at your age.
Rynn: *hands her the fifty*....yea...thanks for the book *looks away and takes the change and the book into her bag*.....
Rynn: i hope this works...*flips her hair down starts working some shampoo into her hair and then cleans that out and works some hair color into her hair and scalp rubs it in* warm....
[after about 15 min she gets her hair done and dry and starts cleaning up]
Rynn: can't let anyone see this *has already done the coloring for her eyebrows and is now wping the counter and sink and facents down including the floor and mirror and throws the paper away *...good....sigh...*looking in the mirror....*....*puts the books away and heads for her locker after she changes her shirt and puts the bag of clothes inher locker and leaves for her next class rather eairly since she skipped last class*
Rynn: *looks at her scedual* hmm...room 245.......*looks around.*......
and if that isn't bad enough, these are posts from later on, after some interaction:
[since there still some time Rynn decides to go check out the gym area]
[walks into the gym where (youguys) are doing rockclimbing and sits in the stands in the back and watches]
Rynn: *smiles* *takes out her sketch book and starts sketching the scene infront of her*
[SHE freaks out for a moment and drops her sketch book and her pencil and pad falls between the bleachers through the slit]
Rynn: ahh!!! im sorry i just got thought it was a nice scene. I wasn't going to put anyone in yet.
{panicks]
Rynn: Oh no my book!!!! *gets down on her hands and knees to look between the seats through the slit and spots her sketch book*....i have to get that back my art hw is in there!!!
((Good god, kill me now....thing is, it gets worse. Much worse.))
[ill assume this is a japanese school]
Rynn: I gotta get it back!! *jumps off the bleachers from a low seat and goes around the side and starts to head in under the bleachers weaving through the poles (different angles)(the bleachers are the ones that can be retracted intot he wall.)
[Edward notices that a matnince personel is walking towards a power box mounted on the wall and opens it and turns a key and he hears the bleacher jerk and make a noise and panics as he realises that the bleachers shes under is being closed into the wall while shes under it and shell be diced into slivers][sorry]
[Edward (nice guy i hope) gets down to her and tells her to hurry and runs to the matnes guy to get him to stop]
[he manages to get him to stop the bleachers and he runs in to pull her out]
Rynn: *sketch book in hand with her pencil too* *he pulled her out fast enough to save her but she riped her skirt of her uniform and landed on top of him* ahh!!...uh..*quickly gets up * im uh sorry..* notices her skirts ripped* eeep!!! *grabs her baggs and runs out of the gym*
AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please kill me. I mean, it was explained in pages one and two that it is an AMERICAN school (the site's making a Japanese High School Dating Sim sort of thing, so that's why the confusion is there), for one, not counting all the obvious mistakes, godmoding, illiteracy, and everything like that. And there is no uniform, to say. Please kill me....
And the sad thing is, I have to try to work with this, or look like a total idiot because Donna, my character, is only talking to Daniel....
[in the bookstore!]
Rynn: hmm....*looking through the shelfs* its got to be in here....*looks for a few minutes and finds a book and heads to the counter to pay for it*
Staff: hmm...thatill be 25. 75 please.....
Rynn: *takes out her wallet and is fliping through her unorganised bills*....can you break a 50?
Staff: sure...hmm never seen anyone with white hair at your age.
Rynn: *hands her the fifty*....yea...thanks for the book *looks away and takes the change and the book into her bag*.....
Rynn: i hope this works...*flips her hair down starts working some shampoo into her hair and then cleans that out and works some hair color into her hair and scalp rubs it in* warm....
[after about 15 min she gets her hair done and dry and starts cleaning up]
Rynn: can't let anyone see this *has already done the coloring for her eyebrows and is now wping the counter and sink and facents down including the floor and mirror and throws the paper away *...good....sigh...*looking in the mirror....*....*puts the books away and heads for her locker after she changes her shirt and puts the bag of clothes inher locker and leaves for her next class rather eairly since she skipped last class*
Rynn: *looks at her scedual* hmm...room 245.......*looks around.*......
and if that isn't bad enough, these are posts from later on, after some interaction:
[since there still some time Rynn decides to go check out the gym area]
[walks into the gym where (youguys) are doing rockclimbing and sits in the stands in the back and watches]
Rynn: *smiles* *takes out her sketch book and starts sketching the scene infront of her*
[SHE freaks out for a moment and drops her sketch book and her pencil and pad falls between the bleachers through the slit]
Rynn: ahh!!! im sorry i just got thought it was a nice scene. I wasn't going to put anyone in yet.
{panicks]
Rynn: Oh no my book!!!! *gets down on her hands and knees to look between the seats through the slit and spots her sketch book*....i have to get that back my art hw is in there!!!
((Good god, kill me now....thing is, it gets worse. Much worse.))
[ill assume this is a japanese school]
Rynn: I gotta get it back!! *jumps off the bleachers from a low seat and goes around the side and starts to head in under the bleachers weaving through the poles (different angles)(the bleachers are the ones that can be retracted intot he wall.)
[Edward notices that a matnince personel is walking towards a power box mounted on the wall and opens it and turns a key and he hears the bleacher jerk and make a noise and panics as he realises that the bleachers shes under is being closed into the wall while shes under it and shell be diced into slivers][sorry]
[Edward (nice guy i hope) gets down to her and tells her to hurry and runs to the matnes guy to get him to stop]
[he manages to get him to stop the bleachers and he runs in to pull her out]
Rynn: *sketch book in hand with her pencil too* *he pulled her out fast enough to save her but she riped her skirt of her uniform and landed on top of him* ahh!!...uh..*quickly gets up * im uh sorry..* notices her skirts ripped* eeep!!! *grabs her baggs and runs out of the gym*
AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please kill me. I mean, it was explained in pages one and two that it is an AMERICAN school (the site's making a Japanese High School Dating Sim sort of thing, so that's why the confusion is there), for one, not counting all the obvious mistakes, godmoding, illiteracy, and everything like that. And there is no uniform, to say. Please kill me....
And the sad thing is, I have to try to work with this, or look like a total idiot because Donna, my character, is only talking to Daniel....